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Posted by N10452

based on my previous post critisizing the job openings posted on a certain site, and just to show that i am not critisizing for the sake of it, here is a corrected version i wrote in like 10 minutes ..

I didnt write an extra professional thing, just a more appropriate one, and didnt take more time doing so just to prove no effort was put into writing this page, meaning whomever did it was not serious about it, and therefore will be damaging to the LF and this whole reform project rather than helpful.

Feel free to send it to whomever is in charge there and use it, i dont want any credits nor thanks whatsoever.


Filed under: Critiques, Personal Opinions
Posted by N10452 on 06.02.07 @ 9:41 am |

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8 Comments. Add your own...

  • 1. Appo | June 2nd, 2007 at 9:55 am

    Rafik,
    ma tez3al menni, bass i can tell the original one stil better…
    u r using bussiness type…
    N.B: i took a course in writing job description.
    regards,

  • 2. N10452 | June 2nd, 2007 at 10:31 am

    Lol,
    ma tez3al minne inta .. bass el ouwet mich dekkene but an institution … and this is a JOB u r applying to .. mich ta2 7anak ..

    and its not that business anyway ..

    Still cant figure out how u found the original one better .. looks like u were the one who wrote it ..

  • 3. Appo | June 2nd, 2007 at 4:39 pm

    lol not at all, and for ur information i’ve concern more than you about lot of mistakes… but as i told you i prefer to contact them directly… rather than post it…
    be sure i’m not the one who wrote it.
    Trust me, all parties worldwide do the same… ma fiya shi ya rafik.

    take care
    Appo

  • 4. zahlelfers | June 2nd, 2007 at 5:03 pm

    i think enno farik el official website taba3 el lebanese-forces mech kel halkad, w hayde hiyye el 7akika. fiyoun ba3d ya3emlo a7la bi ktir men hallak.
    W heide hiyye msibetna ne7na el lebneniye bwazif eben 3ammo 7atta law ma ken ya3rif yektoub esmo ( mech 3al kafe2a ).
    w ma 3am befham lay la hallak el ouwet ba3edna mech kel halkad mnazamin.
    Fi ktir ouwet ouwet bi france w usa w australia menfiyin w ba3d la hallak ma 7adan talla3 fiyoun ( nsinehoun).
    Mo2tamar msala7a ma 3melna la nlem chamel el ouwet ba3d aktar men 3 years . shou ba3edna natrin ???

  • 5. Delta | June 3rd, 2007 at 2:22 am

    zahle every where in the world u see it not in lebanon its always whom u know ya bro iits sad but its the truth

    w3an mo2tamar il mousalaha lool ya man nedayna ktoir badak min yesma3 all the bklog posters posted about it bass lhakim was busy bi moukefa2et sit ridda :p sad but true i recall 2month ago there was a post about hannoun and u know what i know hakim knew that we post it about it i dont know why ma fi mosalaha ba3ed bi hizb il ouwet i still remenber i use to say 3touwon some time bass 3ataynehoun time thelafo ma3 jomblat ya bro badel ma yitsalaho ma3 ikhwetoun chu baze2 3alla hele ????????????

  • 6. FranceLiban | June 3rd, 2007 at 2:31 am

    i have to agree with N10452,

    a quick look at what is wrote on the LF website shows the weak and unprofessional work.

    Nevertheless, i do find that the website is progressing at full pace and that it will shortly attain a very respectful standard.

  • 7. Shadow | June 3rd, 2007 at 2:52 pm

    We should all help Lebanese Forces to be a better party . A constructive critic is helpful, but we should all work together for LF as Emile said .

    We should ask ourselves what we did to LF ?

    By the way N10452 ,

    WE hope seeing u as a senior Political activist.

  • 8. Emile | June 6th, 2007 at 12:25 pm

    work for the LF not against it.. kelna ouwet w ra7 neb2a ouwet.. w KELNA MA MNEL&A@ ASHKHAS! mech bass enta.. na7nou rijal kadiyat…good luck rafi2.. w change the attitude plz..
    ra7 tdal jrasna tde2



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